Composing : Please rate my work. by Shahriar Vaghfrahmani

Hi, Shahriar Vaghfrahmani. The music fits the video up until 0:56. The music after that point doesn't fit the video, and the music after that point has too much going on. My favorite part about the music is the opera singing. I just don't think it's right for this video.

You're in what I’d call the 'figuring it out' phase. You’re creating good music, but it feels a bit scattered and doesn’t quite have a unique identity yet. My advice? Take a step back, choose a more cinematic video to pair with your work, and simplify your approach. Sometimes less really is more.

Great advice, Stephen Folker!

Kind of similar to Maurice's comment, I think there's almost a hit point missing at :52, where the Jet flies by. Start with some drum loop, (or something made up) on the keyboard and use as underscore, then add to it. Listen to some Military music, ... etc. I'm not a specialist, ... yet (LoL) though listening to some more music will help with more writing opportunities. ( I had to listen to a lot of Traditional Barq., Classical and Romantic music in my Undergrad studies). Even at Belmont U., I remember going to Library and listen to many contemporary as well as Traditional music.

Hope your weekend is great !

K. Kennard

Thank you dear Maurice Vaughan for your detailed comment and I'm agree with you.

Stephen Folker H , I think it's very worth to save "Sometimes less really is more" in my mind forever

Kerry Kennard You had listen to a lot of Traditional Barq., Classical and Romantic music in your Undergrad studies. how much is great!

You're welcome, Shahriar Vaghfrahmani.

“Let me count the ways” - lol

No - Always tight schedule while in school- every hour blocked out (ex. Piano 8 am - M W F /

T / TH - music theory class

M-Sat = drum - percussion practice.

Have a great week !

KK