I am sorry, it is just too unbelievable 1. Any thing can synthesized. 2. You can't ship stuff around the world that quickly. 3. The plot is way too simple and won't hold up. Get better ideas and material. I am pretty straight forward so please do not take offense just learn from mistakes and move on.
I found this clip riveting -- I think it's a great high concept plot. Those are strong numbers -- shipping tons within 48 hours (of effectiveness). You have to make the technical case for that somehow, show it the way Michael Crichton films show the tech. But if you can, it adds to the edgy tempo. Love that local languages are mixed in; will there be more characters developed with personal stories intertwined with the basic premise? What's shown here feels like documentary, I'd love to see some individual lives developed and lead us through the story.
I am sorry, it is just too unbelievable 1. Any thing can synthesized. 2. You can't ship stuff around the world that quickly. 3. The plot is way too simple and won't hold up. Get better ideas and material. I am pretty straight forward so please do not take offense just learn from mistakes and move on.
I found this clip riveting -- I think it's a great high concept plot. Those are strong numbers -- shipping tons within 48 hours (of effectiveness). You have to make the technical case for that somehow, show it the way Michael Crichton films show the tech. But if you can, it adds to the edgy tempo. Love that local languages are mixed in; will there be more characters developed with personal stories intertwined with the basic premise? What's shown here feels like documentary, I'd love to see some individual lives developed and lead us through the story.
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