I am working on the final edits and waiting for feedback from the instructor, other students in class, and eventually here in the next couple of weeks.
This has been a year of research, learning, writing, editing, and hard work, but I am so satisfied with the results. I am happy to announce that I have completed the first draft of my first feature film screenplay, "White Lily."
Logline:
Based on a true story in war-torn Soviet Russia, a fiercely determined young pilot defies gender barriers to become the first female fighter ace. As her notoriety grows, she must navigate ruthless enemies, the skepticism of her comrades, and the devastating loss of those she loves.
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Congratulations on finishing the first draft, Montana Clayton! Which class are you taking?
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Maurice Vaughan, I'm enrolled at Southern New Hampshire University for a BA in Creative writing with a focus on Screenwriting and a Minor in Art History; it's my English 357 Advanced Screenwriting Workshop, which is the final screenwriting capstone.' The instructor is amazing Douglas Scott Hessler https://www.imdb.com/name/nm0381636/
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That's great, Montana Clayton. I just checked out Douglas' IMDb page. He was in Intruder.
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This looks amazing Montana Clayton and congratulatuions!!
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Congratulations Montana Clayton
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Congratulations, Montana. The cover is truly powerful, and I deeply admire the effort and dedication you put into bringing this project to life. Well done!
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Nice poster, was this your work?
Ken Turocy it is openai Dalle-3, i had to work on the prompts a bit to get what I was happy with. I also added the text myself. While I still have some reservations about AI, I do find I enjoy the graphic stuff a lot and the challenge of the prompts.
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Man this is awesome Montana Clayton ! And good on you for taking a class on creative writing. I took one many years ago and it not only helped but was extremely encouraging. I felt like I was in my element when I was in class. Love the screenplay poster as well. All the best with this. Sounds like an exciting story!