I'm very new to Stage 32, but wanted to take a crack at this "Lounge". I am a Cinematographer, Director, and Editor. I've recently written a script for a short film that I want to direct and shoot. I'm not a writer though - it's very challenging to me and I've received positive and "constructive" feedback - both have their extremes. I have the story crystal clear in my head though. Both forms of feedback came from those who are not really writers, but know story and are in the film business in some capacity. I'm wondering if I can have a couple writers provide feedback on it? When you do provide feedback, and it's negative, please give a way to fix it - or at least ideas for me to think about so I can use my own imagination to fix. Otherwise, it's just a complaint in my eyes. If there are any takers on this, I'd greatly appreciate it. I can send a PDF via email. Thanks!
Screenwriting : Script feedback by Ryan Atkins
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I'll give it a read for you. You can send me a NDA through email, or consider this a NDA? Either way...
You can email ray@instigatorstudios.com
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I'd certainly love to help. christianswacker@gmail.com
Is this a short or feature length film?
Harald, it's a short film
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I appreciate it Ray and Christian. Emails have been sent.
hberan@idyllwildarts.org
I'd be interested in giving it a read bztobin0968@gmail.com
Harold and Ben, I've sent both of you a Non-Disclosure agreement vie email. Once you send back, I'll send the script. I just want to keep things safe.
Got the email! Thanks, I'll return your NDA first thing in the morning!
Hey Ryan, I've done some coverage work and I can look at it for you.
Ryan i wish you the best of luck
I'm happy to help out as well. kyle_le_roux@live.com
Hi Ryan, you can e-mail me with your screenplay at philrash@gmail.com I'll brainstorm some ideas