Your Stage : Logline review by Zondra Mae

This is the logline I came up with for my latest screenplay that I entered in the Bluecat Screenwriting contest. Thoughts on this logline would help me out so much to refine my writing skills. LOGLINE for "Waking Darkness" After surviving the slaughter of her whole family, a woman's mind splits, creating a dark personality that goes on the hunt for the serial killer who destroyed her life. You can read the first five pages at: http://itsunique.webs.com/apps/blog/ Thank you