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Brian Elliott

Trailer for "Resolve" latest short film.

Hi all, here's a trailer for my latest short film, Resolve (run time 30 minutes). I'm curious your thoughts on the trailer and how the film looks to you, if it piques your interest in seeing the final film. https://vimeo.com/57334222 Thanks everyone.

Mark Ratering

I see ten of these a week yours is 9 out of 10. It's very good. Don't like the reporters voice I was a cameraman for KGO TV and your reporter would have never made it.

Brian Elliott

Thanks very much Mark! Could you be more specific as to what didn't work about the voice? It would not be difficult to re-record and/or recast that audio for the final product if I can pinpoint what is off.

Mark Ratering

Not a big deal. But the reporters voice is to hign, reporters voices are lower and the words he uses are not words of a reporter. Not a big deal but I noticed.

Kevin S. Birnbaum

I'd watch this. I never say that. But I'd watch this. And I think Mark is right, the reporter has to sound forceful, strong. One other thing, drop the names of the actors if they're unknown. If no one knows who they are then don't do it. Just gets in the way of the edit.

Keith (Frey) Love

I like it, a little bit more color correcting but I'd leave the names why? It doesn't matter if they are unknown with a great performance they will be recognized. There is documentary film from the early 80's that had some of today's actorsd their acting was garbage but what propelled them was the ability to continue to act.

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