On Writing : Aloha play boys and girls by Max Boyce

I've never written a play before. This example, ESCAPE, was a short story contest entry for 'watching paint dry' as the theme. The film script sucked big time, so I converted to play form in CELTX. It is a prison drama, and if you are currently in prison, go ahead and produce it... have fun. No need to send me an invitation to the opening. I'd like some feedback as to whether it works or not. - måx http://www.tradewindsweb.com/ESCAPE/ESCAPE-play.pdf