This is what I have so far. I'm new to screenwriting, so any advice will be much appreciated. MOVIE TITLE - YouTube Partner 1. In a battle over YouTube Video Views, an unemployed male math teacher teams up with a feisty female beautician and together produce violent and racy YouTube videos. 2. An unemployed male math teacher bets that he can get more YouTube views than a Russian Gangster. 3. Two teachers, a beautician, and Russian Gangster compete for YouTube views by producing videos loaded with violence and racy content.
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I would suggest: An unemployed math teacher bets that he can get more YouTube views than a Russian gangster by producing videos loaded with violence and racy content.
First, unless you have permission, you might want to be careful about using "product placement". If you are writing it for experience, then go for it, if not, I wouldn't waste the time it takes to write a good script. There's my two cents! LOL! With that being said; here's a few links that may help! http://thescriptlab.com/screenwriting/script-tips/540-how-to-write-a-log... http://www.archetypewriting.com/articles/QTers/logline_MM.htm