Filmmaking / Directing : New Plot Summary by Sebastian Butler II

Due to the huge menace of writer's wall, I have decided to start anew. This includes a new plot. Question for those reading it: is this a strong plot? Is there anyway I can make it stronger? Any other questions, comments, and/or concerns. PLOT FOR "FORBIDDEN": In a quiet town of New Hope, a change is coming. A creature of science is made by Dr. Brian E. Greyson, which goes by the name of HC 2.05 (later known as Winston). Due to a police raid, the being is thrust into the world of man. After roaming the streets, a kind pastor takes him and shows him that not humans are bad. While in the church, he meets Bethany Anne-Marie DeGraw, the daughter of Anthony DeGraw, a former attorney and divorcee. Their lives will be forever intertwined. But, their relationship has to be a secret since this town is a traditional one. Bethany, while with Winston, that her feelings for him aren’t coincidental. She is one of Dr. Greyson earlier, more successful experimentations. Winston will help her come to terms with it and in doing so uncover their true feelings for each other that, by its very nature, is Forbidden and Unbreakable.