Filmmaking / Directing : Sitcom'ish short film by John Ryan Kelmer

http://vimeo.com/user15282440/cakewalk Hi guys, this was my first short film. we made it last year and I know there is a ton I have to improve on but if you had time to scroll through it wanted to see if you had any tips as I prepare for a new short I want to make now that I finally have time again to do. Thanks!!