Screenwriting : Trailer for script by Sergey Velichko

Hi! I have made two trailers for my scripts. This is a short video that was created from parts of other movies, sundry fragments of video from YouTube et cetera. These trailers have to help me to clarify features and a tone my stories. And, of course, they have to attract the attention of producers and agents to my scripts. Please, find 6 minutes to watch it. Say, are these trailers able to perform these tasks? Do I need to change them somehow? Thanks in advance! You can watch my trailers here: https://www.stage32.com/profile/249792/reel