Filmmaking / Directing : Short Film - Deathly Acquisitions by Bernice Breckon

Last of 3 iFlow Production short films. Would really appreciate feedback and thoughts on the film. Thanks. 'When evil mastermind Colossomus wants a bank loan to build a Death Ray Laser on the Moon he faces some unlikely opposition in the form of bureaucracy and a nervous young clerk.' https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvA9J432wh8