Screenwriting : How's this for a Logline by Dale Devoe Inscore

Dale Devoe Inscore

How's this for a Logline

After being away for yrs, he comes home to discover a curse his great uncle, a satanic priest put on his hometown, a curse he now has to destroy.

Trey Wickwire

Hey Dale, I wish I could offer great advice but I struggle with loglines too, its one of my weakest areas. So please take that into account. I read the first thread on this as well so my suggestion below factors in some of those comments and info as well. A writer returns to his hometown in search of his roots only to meet family resentment and a satanic curse placed on the town by his own great uncle. I don't know that this is a great logline but I think it captures many of the things you've been talking about in the two threads. Hope it helps.

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