Hey Dale, I wish I could offer great advice but I struggle with loglines too, its one of my weakest areas. So please take that into account. I read the first thread on this as well so my suggestion below factors in some of those comments and info as well. A writer returns to his hometown in search of his roots only to meet family resentment and a satanic curse placed on the town by his own great uncle. I don't know that this is a great logline but I think it captures many of the things you've been talking about in the two threads. Hope it helps.
Hey Dale, I wish I could offer great advice but I struggle with loglines too, its one of my weakest areas. So please take that into account. I read the first thread on this as well so my suggestion below factors in some of those comments and info as well. A writer returns to his hometown in search of his roots only to meet family resentment and a satanic curse placed on the town by his own great uncle. I don't know that this is a great logline but I think it captures many of the things you've been talking about in the two threads. Hope it helps.