Pirates' Cove = Drama A small town with big town problems that it's two best detectives try to solve.
Screenwriting : Logline for TV drama by Dale Devoe Inscore
Other topics in Screenwriting:
Check out Trending Discussions
Register / Log In
needs characters, specifics, what types of problems, what makes them diff from other towns problems?
1 person likes this
and why should we care about the detectives?
What Danny said plus one: I'm not normally a grammar hound but when one sentence is the most important sentence that you send to potential buyers or reps, you've got to scour it for things like "its" and "it's". One apostrophe is enough to make a reader pass.
Shelley, wrote it on my phone and it did that.
Hate to do this, but that's not a sentence. It needs a predicate.
I'm somewhat hooked by the first half... the second half loses me. The word "best" as a character description doesn't connect me to them or the story. It's kind of like when your mom says you are "special". We want to see characters that are reflections of ourselves or a heightened version of ourselves... even in that one little word. All the best!
Big town problems??? What are those?
This is a tagline for the promo. I need a sense of conflict, the trajectory of the series and some character details about the detectives, presumably the main characters.
Reads more than a tagline than a log line. What's the central conflict?