I'm about to punch in Fade In: on a TV pilot I've been ramping up and it's going to start with a rough looking homeless man turning the rain off an on like a faucet. Out of context, this is insane but isn't that the point? What's the craziest, most attention grabbing way you've started a script to wrangle in your audience?
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A fast food worker telling his boss, how he messed up the best thing to ever walk thru the doors of the fast food restaurant. >rant style. Gives a vested interest on where this guy is coming from and entertaining, (so i thought)
I killed the "hero" in the first ten pages and made the comic relief sidekick take over from there.
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Simon, I think you got something there! It does make me curious what the next move is
Wow! That's ballsy, William! I LOVE IT
What a great idea! Just keep writing.