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SYNOPSIS:
A man (appropriately named Unknown) struggles with depression as his mind (the Id, Ego and Super Ego) struggles through this dark comedy. He meets with friends and his inner self in a struggle from day in and out. Nothing really goes his way as he can imagine scenarios in his mind- a story about his continuous cycle. And when things seem to be going his way it doesn’t. The story ends when the mind seems to kill itself(?).
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Thanks for the rating. The story is more than not based on my experiences of depression (back in Middle and High School).
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Thanks for the suggestion. I’ll also be adding other work.
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