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DIRTY LAUNDRY - T.V.
By Gary A. Jonezy

GENRE: Drama, Family, Other
LOGLINE:

An aging porn star struggles to balance family, the rigors of her career and an obsession to stay in the limelight.

Monserrate Pagan Jr

R rate? Family ? the word Porn brings all sorts of images to the mind. Are you missing any words maybe make it a bit cleaner or clearer

Gary A. Jonezy
@Monserrate Pagan Jr

How would you make it cleaner that this? I'm curious.

Gary A. Jonezy
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Hahaha. From what I've learned about making loglines for television you want to have what the ongoing struggle will be. For our MC, staying in the limelight, balancing a family and trying to stay relevant in her career throughout the show... This is from what I've learned :/

Monserrate Pagan Jr
@Monserrate Pagan Jr

The question is where does it fall in your mind??

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