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HEAVY
By Gary A. Jonezy

GENRE: Comedy, Drama
LOGLINE:

After the death of his mother, an overweight gym salesman wrestling with depression finds support in the unlikely form of a ten year old self help guru.

Janet Caulfield
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I like um all...but this one is the best! Best...Janet:)

Gary A. Jonezy
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Thanks Lyse! Appreciate the feedback. I was a bit rocky on leaving it myself. It's a work in progress as it comes to the actual script. Writing is hard :P

Gary A. Jonezy
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Thanks Janet. I appreciate you reading them all.

Monserrate Pagan Jr

curious to see how a mother effects the salesman and what the weight tie in is? I know a lot of people get depress and eat too much as an escape - need to hear more on this direction

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