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In a dystopian city, an angel-turned-human and a former special ops soldier must rescue his sister and stop ancient evil from replacing humanity’s bloodline with that of the Nephilim.
SYNOPSIS:
Genre: Action/Fantasy/Supernatural
Format: Feature
Nutshell: City of Angels meets Children of Men
In a world where angels and Nephilim coexist, a man named Jon, once an angel, now living as a human, becomes embroiled in a battle against nefarious forces led by a Nephilim, Damian Rall. With the help of his allies, including a wrongfully dishonorably discharged special ops soldier named Raphael Kane and the hacker known as “Mother Ghost” named Nora Bishop, Jon fights to stop Damian's plans to replace humanity’s bloodline with that of the Nephilim. The process includes experimentation on the homeless of Covenant City resulting in suicides and crimes committed by the same.
As Jon confronts Damian and his army of Nephilim in the Rall Foundation Tower, Raphy and his sister Naomi, trapped in the tower, make a daring escape. They are pursued by catatonic humans under Damian's influence, leading to a thrilling car chase through Covenant City.
Meanwhile, “Mother Ghost”, plays a crucial role in the unfolding events, aiding Jon and his allies from behind the scenes. The climax sees Jon facing off against Damian and his sister Douma, in a battle that pushes him to his limits and beyond.
As the dust settles and the tower collapses, Jon emerges victorious, having destroyed the source of the Nephilim’s power. The story concludes with the Kane family, reunited and celebrating the opening of the Clara Kane Home for Children, a testament to their resilience and the bonds of family.
Throughout the story, themes of sacrifice, redemption, and the power of love intertwine, creating a narrative that explores the depths of humanity and the celestial.
The pitch deck is available for viewing here:http://u.pc.cd/98g
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Thanks Maurice Vaughan!!
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You're welcome, Leonardo Ramirez. Can't wait to see this!
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This is very good Leonardo.
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Thanks a ton Asmaa Jamil and Bill McCormick - means a lot coming from you folks!
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Thank you Marcos Fizzotti!
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You're welcome, Leonardo.
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I love it!
You are the best, Sandra Isabel Correia - thank you!!!
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