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VANPIRE
By Paul Glen Neuman
Looking for an easy meal, an 80s era vampire, whose van is a coffin on wheels, goes to college to quench his thirst for higher education—all while a determined homicide detective fights to end the blood-sucking monster’s murderous rampage.
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Hi Paul, this sounds like it could be a fun movie! To punch up your logline, I'd add some more details about the story. Try starting with an inciting incident, like what motivated the vampire to go to college. You could also add some details about the main conflict.
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Thanks Molly!
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