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LOGLINE: TRUE Horace Bell and Juan Flores cross purposes when seeking retribution, one man following the law and the other revolution; their prize is gold-rich California.
SYNOPSIS:
HORACE BELL
screenplay is an Epic Western Biopic based in the infant Pueblo de Los Angeles in
the 1850s. Similar in tone to Dances With Wolves with a strong
revisionist Latino theme, it appeals to a four-quadrant audience and
will attract emerging and established talent. Much of the script is
presented in Spanish with English subtitles. Mexican heroes spring out
from the forgotten pages of history into the vibrant reality of real
people who shaped our American culture, men like Tomas Sanchez, Andres
Pico, and Felipe Talamantes.
Horace Bell is a 22-year-old Indiana native and can-do adventurer at the Gold Rush who
moves to the pueblo after his best friend and ranger partner is murdered
by Juan Flores. Horace’s vow for revenge against Flores immerses him
into a deeper war over the future of California. The Mexican-American
War is over and California is a new American state. The Spanish Dons
fear the upcoming changes as they stand to lose their massive land
grants.
Flores, motivated by his own demons, vows to take California
back for Mexico. His gang of ex-cons and displaced vaqueros challenges
the Dons to join him. As a new Los Angeles ranger, Horace sides with
the law and advises the Dons to capture Flores and defeat his gang.
What the Dons decide to do and how Horace accomplishes his mission makes
a compelling, fresh, and believable story. By its end, Horace matures
into accepting the reality that life brings tragedy whether deserved or
not.
The main female romantic roles include Paulette Bovierre, a
delicious looking French café owner/fencer who dices meats and men. Her
female competition for Horace’s affection is Jacinta Talamantes, an
enticing Mexican-American heiress who plays Horace like the multiple
keys on her piano. Horace enjoys playing them both.
Major Scenes Include:
Horace’s anguish over his friend’s murder; Paulette
and Horace romanticizing the story of the founding of Los Angeles; the
rodeo games and fandango at the Sanchez Rancho; Jacinta’s bold
invitation to Horace to court her; the factual and revolutionary San
Quentin breakout; the battle of San Juan Capistrano; the murder of
Sheriff Barton and his posse; Flores’ escape and wounding of Horace; and
Flores’ cold murder of Horace’s betrothed.
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Updated on 2-24-2023 - Honestly Thank You for taking your time above - Steven Wayne Knight, M.A.