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DARK FOREST

DARK FOREST
By Jelica Zdravković

GENRE: Thriller, Mystery
LOGLINE:

After the mysterious murder of an 18-year-old boy in the woods, four friends must find out the truth in order to clear themselves from a suspicion. 

SYNOPSIS:

The story begins with the murder of an 18-year-old young man. Although the murder happened in a place where four other people were, nobody knows anything about it. As the story slowly builds to the solution of the mysterious murder, it allows us to push the boundaries of thinking by making our own theory about it. In the deep, dark forest, anything is possible. Are any of them murderers? Did any of them help the killer? Or is the killer someone unknown? These four teenagers will have to learn have to deal with death of a friend, but also everyday troubles with parents, school, love life label as killers.

Maurice Vaughan

This sounds like a thrilling story, Jelica Zdravković. I could picture the show as I read the logline and the synopsis.

In the logline, it says there are three friends, but in the synopsis, it says there are four teenagers.

Other than that, I think the logline needs some work. Here's a logline suggestion: "After the mysterious murder of an 18-year-old boy in the woods, three teenage friends (or four teenage friends) try to find out the truth so they can clear their names and _________ (the stakes - avoid going to juvenile detention or whatever the stakes are)."

Jelica Zdravković

Thank you. I haven't noticed a mistake. It is four :)

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Jelica Zdravković.

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