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SYNOPSIS:
Jack Raven is a young orphan in New York City in 1938 that meets a unique kind of priest. Raised as his ward, Jack is introduced into the world of the supernatural: Heaven, Hell, and everything in between. After one adventure halts his aging, Jack continues to travel the world, investigating supernatural events and meeting a wide variety of characters.
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Ok, so not a five star logline. How can I improve it? Should I put the mc's name? Put that it was dirty cops that killed the man?
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