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THE RETREAT COUNTERS
By Tiffany L Wade

GENRE: Thriller, Sci-fi
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When system control arrested families due to piracy, the families teenage sons and daughters become retreat counters to save their family. 

Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Tiffany L Wade. I like the "teenagers save their families" angle. What's system control, and what are retreat counters?

Tasha Lewis

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Fahad Joyfield

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Tiffany L Wade

System control are the law in Trestle and the retreat counters are prisoners who need to face their fears so they can save their parents.

Maurice Vaughan

Ok, Tiffany L Wade. Maybe say what system control is so producers, directors, etc. will know. And how will facing their fears enable the teenagers to save their parents?

Michael Dzurak

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