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When system control arrested families due to piracy, the families teenage sons and daughters become retreat counters to save their family.
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Hi, Tiffany L Wade. I like the "teenagers save their families" angle. What's system control, and what are retreat counters?
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System control are the law in Trestle and the retreat counters are prisoners who need to face their fears so they can save their parents.
Ok, Tiffany L Wade. Maybe say what system control is so producers, directors, etc. will know. And how will facing their fears enable the teenagers to save their parents?
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Hi, Tiffany L Wade. I like the "teenagers save their families" angle. What's system control, and what are retreat counters?
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System control are the law in Trestle and the retreat counters are prisoners who need to face their fears so they can save their parents.
Ok, Tiffany L Wade. Maybe say what system control is so producers, directors, etc. will know. And how will facing their fears enable the teenagers to save their parents?
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