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ANOTHER NEW YEAR
By Austin Van Rensburg
Hoping to not spend another New Year's day alone, a quiet young adult does his best to spend the time with someone but time ticks on closer to the next day, forcing him to make quick arrangements before it's too late.
ANOTHER NEW YEAR
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Hey Austin! I like this set up alot, it just needs that young adult's plan to not be alone so we know what they have to overcome
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Great title, Austin Van Rensburg.
I agree with Emily J. Here's part of a logline suggestion: “Not wanting to spend another New Years Day alone. a _______ (another adjective instead of "lonesome" since "Not wanting to spend another New Years Day alone" tells us he's lonely) young adult tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/etc. _______ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes).”
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Emily J, thanks for pointing this out. I will be sure to improve the logline. Thank you as well Maurice. Much appreciated.
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You're welcome, Austin Van Rensburg.