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The Adler Sisters had always longed for a connection to their father, who vanished when they were children. Now, after the death of their mother, Salome, Beatrice and Cordelia inherit the legacy of the Adler family, the most revered and influential dynasty in Los Angeles. Hoping to heal the wounds of the past, Salome embarks on a quest to find her father, eventually roping her sisters in. But what begins as a journey of reconciliation soon turns into a nightmare, as they discover a devastating secret that could ruin the family's reputation and endanger their lives.
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Sounds like a thrilling concept, James Earl. I think you should change "a woman" to "a _______ (an adjective and the protagonist's position/role)." Like "a reckless model."