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THE 3 MUSKETEERS & ALIENS
By Mark Deuce
The 3 Musketeers must find their lost friend in the mountains of France where he was last seen, and a stranger has a secret weapon that can help save them and all of The French Folk from the alien Reptilians.
SYNOPSIS:
The 3 Musketeers embark on their most daring mission yet, as they race against time to rescue a lost friend during a sudden alien invasion. With the fate of France hanging in the balance, a mysterious stranger emerges, offering a secret weapon that could turn the tide. Watch as trust is tested and alliances form in an epic showdown between the Musketeers and the fearsome alien Reptilians. Will our heroes prevail, or will France fall into enemy hands?
Dive into this thrilling adventure and find out!
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It's unclear how the two clauses are connected. (the lost friend and the alien threat) I'd focus on the main story thread and ensure you clearly communicate your lead, their goal, the opposition to that goal and the associated stakes.
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Love it Mike Childress and thank you for the feedback!
Thank you Phil Clarke
THANK YOU FOR THE PERFECT RATING Bobby G