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A horse stud farm near Bathurst is attacked, and the owner of the land falls ill by injury. An ill-prepared son hires city-slicking help. A vendetta to protect his father's oath of maintaining their legacy; their land.
SYNOPSIS:
E1 - A father too ill to look after his family's horse stud farm, a boy hires a city stranger to learn the ropes in his search for who wronged his family, and land.
E2 - A fully recovered father, wears a patch. And is evicted from his own property for not doing the work to maintain or afford it on his own. He turns to the recent gold rush but is robbed, by his own son. A rivalry brews.
E3 - Outlaw vs. Outlaw, a true Wild West. Father prospects, taking from penniless labour, and the son steals from it. Native tribes are asked if they will help on one condition, which the son breaks. Everyone is at war.
E4 - A gold shortage. The son travels to where another gold rush is in South Australia forming a larger band of outlaws along the way. The city girl doesn't see a point in protecting land that is fought over all the time and travels back to the city and finish studying law. Father struggles to regulate land going from well-off to poor.
E5 - The police catch wind of it all and arrest the father to be hung. Legality finds its place when the police arrest the son, and both go to court over who receives the land. The city girl steps in and appeals the case, on the condition to give up the land. No one agrees, and many die.
Posted 05-08-2023
Note: Consider condensing each season into hour-long, action-packed episodes. With each new episode, an anthology of a year passes, if that would make sense to the audience. So 5 episodes instead of seasons, depending on other writers who want to jump on board and flesh out the history and additional characters to add extra plots to the last 5 seasons. I know I can do at least 5 episodes.
Status: Refining Pilot script. Future episodes are pending.