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RATTLING CHAINS

RATTLING CHAINS
By Robert Bruinewoud

GENRE: Thriller, Horror
LOGLINE:

An untrained newbie is sent to a remote secret facility, to help guard a deep pit, which is rumoured to hold a woman who has been bound in chains for over 150 years.

SYNOPSIS:

A young man, TOM, is driven to a remote location with five other passengers. On his arrival he learns that he is the “new guy” and his new partner, JAN, is not happy with the change.

The other passengers, or “observers” as they are called, know each other well, but are not overly friendly. When they learn Tom hasn’t completed his training, they are disturbed by the breach of procedure and wonder what it means.

Early next morning, Tom learns that their job is to keep watch over “The Well” in a chamber that can only be accessed after descending 6-flights of stairs.

The observers don’t know what is in the hole, but there are stories. According to the most-believed story, the thing in the hole has not been directly observed for 150 years. Despite that, they know it’s still down there and “alive” because sometimes people report hearing the sound of chains rattling.

Jan admits to Tom, that her and her partner were there to experience the last time this happened. It was just two-months earlier, after thirty years of silence.

Jan’s hope that it will be another thirty years before they hear from it again, is shattered during their next shift.

• Screenplay available upon request: robert@assortedprojects.net

– there has been some interest in developing the premise into a feature-length screenplay

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