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SYNOPSIS:
In 'Underground Adventures,' follow the escapades of Shiv, a sheltered Indian teenager, and his unconventional sidekick, Badger, as they delve into the hidden world beneath London's streets. From stumbling upon a psychedelic carnival to competing in an underground baking competition with magical mushrooms, each episode is a wild ride filled with humor, heart, and unexpected twists. As Shiv and Badger navigate the whimsical wonders and quirky characters of the underground, they forge an unlikely bond while unraveling mysteries and questioning the nature of reality itself.
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Meera, this sounds like fun. I am confused about badger though since this is an animation. Is it an animal or a person named badger? There seem to be different descriptions between your log line and your synopsis. Also is there an antagonist or any pushback to their adventures or conflict? If so this should be indicated in the logline and synopsis. Is there a goal for the two? No goal and interest dies out pretty quickly. But I would love to see the first episode!
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Hi! Thank you for your comment, Rob. The badger is called Badger. I couldn't think of a name for the longest time and then it just stuck! There isn't really any overall antagonists just a lot of obstacles each episode that the 2 have to overcome. I really appreciate the message. I am still very new at this and you have given me things to think about when writing the Logline/synopsis!