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A TEAR IN THE AORTA
By Karmin Mosley
A grieving young African-American man forcibly takes action to discover the truth in his father's murder by uncovering police corruption and a web of lies spun by his family.
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Love this Karmin Mosley
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Thought about a cover for your story Karmin Mosley this helps in the visual image of your film. Cheers, Mark
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Mark Deuce I'm going to send you a direct message. I would love to know what you had in mind for the cover!
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The cover and the logline is perfect Karmin Mosley
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Wow, Karmin Mosley! I know there's gonna be a lot of conflict, obstacles, tension, and dilemma in this movie!
I only have one tiny note for your logline: I think the logline would sound better if you put "grieving" before "young."
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Maurice Vaughan Thank you so much for the above note! I'll make that change. I greatly appreciate the help!
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You're welcome, Karmin Mosley. Can't wait to see this movie!
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