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DOPE
By John Scimeca
SYNOPSIS:
Thin ice queen, Charlize Theron as the powerful head of this Pharma corporation. She is frustrated with the media portrayal of a fired female researcher who claims to have secrets which will topple the company.
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This sounds thrilling, John Scimeca! I think your logline needs a better flow and more info.
Something like: After a pharmaceutical company headed by an icy CEO patents a microdot drug which supplies constant dopamine to the brain, a ______ (the main flaw the protagonist has to overcome or an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality) researcher attempts to take it all down ______ (the stakes).
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Hi Maurice, thanks again. I have accepted that my loglines will change like the tide until I find one that best fits.