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A Gothic drama that follows visual artist Khari's unsettling dreams that blur reality. Exploring how art, anxiety, and the supernatural are intertwined at their roots.
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"Peripheral of Blue" is a gothic drama that plunges viewers into the unnerving world of Khari, a talented visual artist grappling with unsettling dreams about a mysterious creature haunting his subconscious. As Khari prepares for a high-stakes art exhibition, his reality blurs with surreal nightmares, challenging his sense of control and sanity. As he gets closer to the opening of the show he is stalked in his dreams by the menacing, otherworldly presence.
The boundary between dream and reality becomes increasingly lucid, leaving Khari trapped in a nightmarish loop. "Peripheral of the Blue" is a unique psychological horror experience that explores the intersection of art, anxiety, and the supernatural. As Khari battles his inner demons, he has to navigate the thin line between perception and hallucination, offering a gripping narrative filled with suspense, surreal imagery, and psychological twists. "Peripheral of the Blue" promises to captivate audiences with its blend of horror, artistry, and the enigmatic unknown.
The boundary between dream and reality becomes increasingly lucid, leaving Khari trapped in a nightmarish loop. "Peripheral of the Blue" is a unique psychological horror experience that explores the intersection of art, anxiety, and the supernatural. As Khari battles his inner demons, he has to navigate the thin line between perception and hallucination, offering a gripping narrative filled with suspense, surreal imagery, and psychological twists. "Peripheral of the Blue" promises to captivate audiences with its blend of horror, artistry, and the enigmatic unknown.
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Personally, I would rewrite the synopsis; the second paragraph has been written twice... Also, the logline could use some work to make it more appealing. For example: "As a visual artist prepares for an important art exhibition, he is stalked by unnerving and otherworldly that blurs everything around him."
Besides that, you have a solid premise and an easily relatable character. I like gothic drama very much.
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