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KALYDA: TREASURE OF THE GODS'
By Kay Gossage-Longo
Kalyda: Treasure of the Gods': In the golden age of Pirates, intense drama collides with high seas adventure as Captain Tantzer is tested to his core for respect and power in the mythical lands of Kalyda.
SYNOPSIS:
Captain Tantzer's quest for the Treasure of the Gods leads to battles with strange creatures and men, but after throwing the world into war, chaos and death, ultimately he discovers that love is the true treasure.
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Hey Kay Gossage-Longo , this looks like great fun and adventure. However, I'm a bit confused. In the logline, Capt. Tantzer is female. In the synopsis the pronoun "he" refers to the subject, Captain Tantzer.
Also, I wonder if you could be a little more specific in the logline by including specific antagonists.
Something like:
In the golden age of Pirates, intense drama collides with high seas adventure as Captain Tantzer fights for respect and power in a battle against mythical creatures and Herculean warriors.
Just brainstorming here...
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This sounds like a blast!
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