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WILD

WILD
By Zac Decker

GENRE: Drama, Comedy
LOGLINE:

After a sponsor's challenge, Zeke and his friends rush to finish their BMX video. Along the way, he faces an emotional encounter with his estranged father and a shift with his crush Sofia, pushing him to confront his past and take a bold shot at his dreams.

Maurice Vaughan

Sounds like a fun script, Zac Decker And great title!

I only have two suggestions for your logline:

#1) Add the teenager's main flaw that he overcomes in the script or add an adjective that describes his personality.

#2) Take out "in this heartfelt coming-of-age comedy." I think your logline sounds better without that part, and your logline will be shorter (43 words with that part, and 38 words without it).

Zac Decker

Maurice Vaughan Love it, thank you!

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Zac Decker. I'd watch this!

Maurice Vaughan

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