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THE BLOOD QUEEN
By Shaun Kolich
In a war-ravaged world where humans and vampires clash, a princess must decide between love for a human prince and loyalty to her vampire queen mother, as both opposing forces strive to unite the kingdoms under their rule.
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In a world shrouded in darkness and betrayal, Queen Lysandria pursues power relentlessly, even at the cost of her daughter’s soul. Aurora and Damian, entangled in a web of deception and power struggles, fight for
peace amidst chaos and violence. As alliances shift and loyalties waver, the fate of the kingdoms hangs in the balance. This tale of love, loss, and sacrifice follows the characters as they navigate a perilous path toward a fragile peace.
THE BLOOD QUEEN
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I would put 'humans' first for consistency as the human prince is first in the second part, also leave out the words 'her' love and 'her' loyalty , and just clarify who the 'both' are in the final part... to give something like...
In a war-ravaged world where humans and vampires clash, a princess must decide between love for a human prince and loyalty to her vampire queen mother, as both opposing forces strive to unite the kingdoms under their rule.
Sarah Jane Mc Carthy Thank you! You are amazing.
Sounds like a great story, wishing you every great success with it Shaun Kolich ! Keep up the good work!
Sarah Jane Mc Carthy Thank you. I love it. As I was writing it all I could think about is I can't wait to watch this lol
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Sounds exciting!
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