Hi Divya, can I suggest that, "When an ambitious Indian-American heiress faces an arranged marriage from her loving father, she's determined to find a way out." sounds a little bit more exciting.
Hi Graham Mulvein thanks for suggestion! I went with "schemes" so it's more clear this is a fun comedy and not a serious drama. Also the story is a bit more nuanced so "determined" isn't the right mindset as she is very much torn about her decision.
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Hi Divya, can I suggest that, "When an ambitious Indian-American heiress faces an arranged marriage from her loving father, she's determined to find a way out." sounds a little bit more exciting.
Hi Graham Mulvein thanks for suggestion! I went with "schemes" so it's more clear this is a fun comedy and not a serious drama. Also the story is a bit more nuanced so "determined" isn't the right mindset as she is very much torn about her decision.