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HEIRESS TO THE THRONE

HEIRESS TO THE THRONE
By Divya Pillai

GENRE: Romance, Comedy
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When an ambitious Indian-American heiress faces an arranged marriage from her loving father, she schemes to find a way out.

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Graham Mulvein

Hi Divya, can I suggest that, "When an ambitious Indian-American heiress faces an arranged marriage from her loving father, she's determined to find a way out." sounds a little bit more exciting.

Divya Pillai

Hi Graham Mulvein thanks for suggestion! I went with "schemes" so it's more clear this is a fun comedy and not a serious drama. Also the story is a bit more nuanced so "determined" isn't the right mindset as she is very much torn about her decision.

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