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An aging movie star dies, and plays a game of hid and seek on her estranged children as a surprise for her departure.
SYNOPSIS:
The film is set during the 1954 era, about a blond bombshell named JAYNE , a budding actress who falls head over heels in love with TAB, an actor who has hidden his homosexuality.
TAB is tempted by JAYNE'S beauty and finds himself in a sexual one night stand with her, which produces a child. The child is given to a wet nurse and sent off to boarding school.
Estranged from her child and now an aging movie star, JAYNE is embittered by losing the role of Dorothy from the Wizard of Oz and her one true love, TAB.
JAYNE indulges her vanity by having her plastic surgeon on speed dial and criticizes her daughter CHANEL who appears to be living a somewhat normal life.
With another funeral to attend, JAYNE finds herself standing among other aged movie stars with botched plastic surgery. They become annoyed with JAYNE'S grandchildren fooling around.
JAYNE in her final moments prepares a game of hide and seek for her estranged children, who discover they were loved and left everything.
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