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THE VEIL EQUATION

THE VEIL EQUATION
By Keith Earvin Daquipil

GENRE: Sci-fi, Mystery
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A string of mysterious murders pulls an investigator and a billionaire’s daughter into a deadly conspiracy, uncovering mysterious symbols and hidden truths that challenge everything they know—revealing reality itself might be an illusion.

SYNOPSIS:

In 2032, a series of murders marked by a mysterious yin-yang symbol shocks the world. When billionaire Steve Hangrove is found dead in Sydney, his daughter, Sandy, hires Kenny Carter, a black-market investigator, to uncover the truth.

Their investigation leads them to Steve's old building, filled with strange symbols—Delta, Tau, and Omega—linked to the murders. They discover a hidden trapdoor and evidence of the Blue Beam Project: a plan to stage a global alien invasion using advanced holograms. But things take a darker turn when they realize that the murders and symbols might point to a shocking truth—reality could be a simulation.

With the cabal behind the murders hunting them down, Kenny and Sandy uncover a web of secrets, involving ancient civilizations, manipulated religions, and a rogue technology connected to a larger conspiracy. The stakes rise when the leader of the cabal reveals a terrifying secret.

Kenny and Sandy must decide whether to expose the truth and risk destroying their world or protect the fragile balance of a reality built on lies. Their journey leads to a final confrontation that unveils a connection to an ancient reptilian civilization that has shaped history.

The Veil Equation is a thrilling sci-fi mystery that combines murder, advanced tech, and deep philosophical questions in a world on the brink of collapse.

Marcos Fizzotti

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Keith Earvin Daquipil

Thank you @Marcos for your ratings. Cheers mate :-)

Keith Earvin Daquipil

Thank you, @Bobby G I truly appreciate the 4-star rating. If there’s anything you feel could be improved to make it even better, I’d love to hear your feedback. :-)

Keith Earvin Daquipil

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Keith Earvin Daquipil

Thanks again for your ratings Nate Rymer . I appreciate your honesty. :)

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