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AGENT 10
By Aaron Traikovski

GENRE: Thriller
LOGLINE:

In a relentless hunt, a resolute black-ops operative allies with a cunning thief to chase a rogue scientist’s world-ending bioweapon, reluctantly uniting with a rival to prevent its launch

Marcos Fizzotti

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Ashley Renee Smith

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Ashley Renee Smith

Aaron Traikovski, great logline! It’s action-packed, high-stakes, and establishes the urgency right away with “a relentless hunt.” The use of clear character archetypes such as a black-ops operative, a cunning thief, and a rogue scientist sets the tone for a thrilling and dynamic storyline. The stakes are clearly global, with a “world-ending bioweapon,” and the reluctant alliance with a rival adds an intriguing layer of conflict and character development. To make it even stronger, you might consider slightly clarifying the flow, as the phrasing at the end could be tightened to enhance clarity. Like, who exactly is the rival, and are they different from the thief? A few specific details could sharpen the emotional core and help the logline stand out further.

Maurice Vaughan

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Maurice Vaughan

This sounds exciting, Aaron Traikovski! One suggestion: Change "chase" to something else. You already said "In a relentless hunt."

Tasha Lewis

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Aaron Traikovski

Thanks for the feedback. Did not expect such a warm and productive set of feedback. I truly appreciate it. Thank you so much everyone.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Aaron Traikovski. I'd definitely watch this movie!

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