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WASH WOODS
By Jessica Rose
After two teens are rescued from the waters of Wash Woods, VA, old legends are stirred up when the sheriff's department starts investigating the beachfront of the ghost town where they find Satan is still haunting the area.
SYNOPSIS:
When two teenagers are mysteriously found in the ocean, the local sheriff of a small town tries to deny the horror tales of the town's past, but soon finds he must face the truth. He teams up with the local town folk who fight the devil together by coming to terms with their own past and the demons they are hiding. The town's pastor is hiding a major secret which explains Lucifer's returned presence in the town.
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Clever. Who believes Lucifer exists?
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Dee, I rewrote the synopsis again by adding more detail. See below. (Oh, and he does exist, but we can fend him off in ways no human can phantom) :) Please see below yet another rewrite of the synopsis: "When two teenagers are mysteriously found in the ocean, the local sheriff of a small town tries to deny the horror tales of the town's past, but soon finds he must face the truth. He teams up with the local town folk who fight the devil together by coming to terms with their own past and the demons they are hiding. The town's pastor is hiding a major secret which explains Lucifer's continued presence in the town."
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I find this story especially intriguing and can see it visually as a feature film!
Thanks Sandra! I just rewrote the log line and the synopsis once again. When you have time, would you read to see if it still entices?
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I would love to read the screenplay if possible! Great story (:
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It wouldn't have to be Lucifer...any Inner Demon or Outer Demon will Suffice. Pick your Poison.
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The line from 'The Usual Suspects', "The Greatest trick the Devil ever pulled was convincing the world he doesn't exist." Fantastic Line!
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