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ENDEMIC VIOLENCE
By Charmane Wedderburn
A wife and mother, the threat of violence at the hands of her husband, sees her living in constant fear. Struggling in poverty with five children, there seems to be no way out, until a visit from her lesbian friend offers a glimmer of hope and change.
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Could it be made more concisde and into one sentence?
"A woman struggling in poverty with five children while living under the threat of violence from her husband, sees no way out… until a visit from her lesbian friend offers a glimmer of hope."
Thanks a lot for the feedback, Michael Dzurak!