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In a world where astral projectionists are used and exploited by agencies for their own ends, one woman decides to fight against those who would use her ability in the name of science and peace.
SYNOPSIS:
Artemis is a projectionist, a person who can travel outside themselves and be invisible except to those like her. But Artemis has a special talent, she can touch things in her projection form, a highly useful skill in an ever increasing hostile world. Taken in by a covert agency, IFA, at the age of 16, Artemis learns all the skills necessary to be a spy. When she discovers the true intent of IFA, she will need all those learned skills to escape and take them down.
Thank you! This one is still in its first draft, so I'm glad someone thinks it sounds good ! :)
Rachael - this is a cool concept. One question about your logline - did you maybe intend to say agencies were exploiting projectionists for their own "ends" versus "means"?