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Tom Demar
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I NEARLY LOST YOU
By Tom Demar

GENRE: Comedy, Sci-fi

LOGLINE: After giving up her baby girl for adoption, a lonely young woman from the ‘90s time-travels, via a vortex in the ladies room of a local grunge rock venue, to the present to meet her depressed adult daughter, and the women, unhappy for opposite reasons, travel back to the '90s together to help each other find joy, self-worth, and the passion to live before returning to their own lives changed for the better.

SYNOPSIS:

https://iNearlyLostYou.com

Maurice Vaughan

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- Tom Demar
2 years ago

Really unique idea, Tom Demar.

I think the logline needs a little work. Something like: "After a young woman in 1990 (or whatever year it is) gets transported to 2023, she searches for her daughter who she gave up for adoption at birth, but she's overwhelmed with the challenge of communicating with a new generation."