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By Tom Demar
A young poet from the wrong side of the tracks escapes the dreary Midwest with her hardcore rapper boyfriend, but has to fend for herself to survive, find her poet's voice, and her love of choice.
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Conflict isn't vivid or clear. But I like the first part
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Also, if it's a "comedy" the humour hasn't been captured in the logline. What makes the story funny? How can you hint to that in the logline?
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