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Tom Demar
FREE FLO

FREE FLO
By Tom Demar

GENRE: Comedy, Drama
LOGLINE: A young poet from the wrong side of the tracks escapes with her hardcore rapper boyfriend to California at the height of the rave era, but has to fend for herself to survive, find her poetic voice and her love of choice, mighty feats in the streets it seems in a desperate, lonely city of dreams. FREE FLO is a rap comedy.

SYNOPSIS:

https://tdemar.wixsite.com/freeflo

Michael David

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Michael David

Conflict isn't vivid or clear. But I like the first part

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Michael David

Also, if it's a "comedy" the humour hasn't been captured in the logline. What makes the story funny? How can you hint to that in the logline?

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