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The Last Passport is an uplifting, inspiring drama about a mysterious old man who enters a magical passport office. George meets characters from all walks of life, dispensing his homespun wisdom as they slip in and out of the lines.
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The Last Passport is a story about real people with real thoughts. It's about you and me; a story that takes an interesting look at who we are as people. The entire story of The Last Passport takes place in a passport office...or so you think. The lead, George Miller is a 70 year old man who takes us on a journey through his life to show us we are not all that different. Each person he meets throughout the time he spends at the passport office make a profound impact on his life, something that is likely to happen to you after watching this film.
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