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EXPERIMENTS IN DATING (WORKING TITLE)
By Clifford McKinney
SYNOPSIS:
Bob is a socially awkward college student that has never dated before. His friend, Chris, has decided to "help" him with his problem by suggesting that he try internet dating and video tape the dates to post on the internet to get advice from people online on how he can improve future dates.
EXPERIMENTS IN DATING (WORKING TITLE)
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This is hilarious! I think it has the perfect tone to it. I think the audience could benefit from the date being a little longer, Maybe some more awkward funny moments, also try giving Chris a reason to walk up to the table. Great work though!
do you need any funny ep's 4 this or?