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UNFINISHED BUSINESS - THE LEGACY OF BLINDANGELS
By W. Paul Hughes

GENRE: Action, Adventure, Drama, Sci-fi, Thriller, War
LOGLINE: An attorney from LA, a war veteran struggling with PTSD, while on vacation to DC with some veteran friends, unearths and foils an anthrax attack on the nation’s capital while opening a parallel universe of otherworldly phenomenon.

SYNOPSIS:

Terrorists, seeking to remove America from the global stage, finalize an aerial anthrax attack aboard a huge oil freighter in the Gulf of Mexico while an attorney, Solomon Justice, a war veteran with post traumatic stress disorder, leaves LA on vacation. However, a puzzling dream invades Solomon a few nights prior to his departure as he hears the words, “unfinished business” before awakening. As the attorney and fellow bikers assist a struggling mom with a flat tire at a Texas rest stop, opening her trunk causes detours of maddening proportions. A hidden dossier and tracking device found beneath the spare tire open a parallel universe. Not realizing a “sleeper” has been amongst them all along, they ultimately board the huge freighter only to find Solomon’s daughter onboard, kidnapped by the terrorists to ensure the attorney’s assistance in freeing Napoleon, their leader. Napoleon is ultimately revealed to be Solomon’s best friend’s supposed dead brother. The veteran bikers are forced to relive the dark past of post traumatic stress disorder as their war experiences cloud their minds and all judgment fades. Once logic becomes lost in the madness their leader, Solomon Justice, flashes back and returns to Vietnam. Ultimately, what their past war experiences had taught them proves to be their redemption. The huge freighter, Unfinished Business, becomes filled with death and the supernatural as the forces of good encounter the darker side of humanity. Mystery is redefined due to an otherworldly revelation that boggles the mind; the Wall, in DC, comes to life as the door to a parallel universe is unexpectedly opened. Justice is full of surprises. Unfinished Business – The Legacy of Blind Angels (Registered WGAw No. 1411856) (©) is the winner of the Bronze Remi Award at the Worldfest Houston International Film Festival for best screenplay in the action/adventure category, 2005. This screenplay is also a “finalist” in 2010 SellAScript Screenwriting Competition. I also have an alternate ending, your option. This story was birthed as a direct result 9/11/01.

UNFINISHED BUSINESS - THE LEGACY OF BLINDANGELS

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LB McGill

okay Paul, I just downloaded the script and I'll give her a read today. Looking forward to it :)

Juldit Singoun

Hi I reading your story. Is it okay for post the hole script? Does anyone interest in your work?

W. Paul Hughes
@Juldit Singoun

Yes Sir. My entire script is at this blog site - http://recon22recon.wordpress.com/ JUST CLICK THE SCREENPLAY LINK, MIDDLE OF PAGE. Thanks Juldit. I have a good producer interested presently, but a re-write first (Yuck):) Stay N touch dude... Paul,

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