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A RAG-TAG SUPERHERO MOVIE WITH A BUNCH OF SICK BASTARDS WHO ARE TASKED WITH FIXING HUMANITY....ONE POOR SAP AT A TIME! THE TEAM ARE ABLE TO TRAVEL THROUGH TIME TO THWART WRONG DOINGS THROUGHOUT HISTORY, ONE THING IS SURE....EARTH WILL NEVER BE THE SAME!
SYNOPSIS:
EARTH HAS BEEN UNDER CLOSE WATCH BY COSMIC LEADERS WHO WATCH AND GUAGE HUMANITIES ACROSS OUR UNIVERSE. THE YEAR 2020 HAS CAUSED EARTH TO SLIP INTO THE DANGER ZONE AND THE MIR TEAM IS TASKED IN SAVING THE PLANET FROM BEING DESTROYED.
ISSUES THAT WILL BE ADDRESSED IN NO PARTICULAR ORDER ARE
CORRUPT WORLD LEADERS...START AT THE TOP...CRIMINALS, CHILD ABUSERS, MURDERERS THROUGHOUT HISTORY..ETC. SIMPLE DAY TO DAY ENCOUNTERS WITH PEOPLE I.E. SCAM ARTISTS, BAD DRIVERS, INTERNET TOUGH GUYS, JUST IGNORANT PEOPLE WITHOUT MANNERS BUT ALL DEALT WITH IN A COMEDIC WAY.
PICTURE THE MIR MEMBERS WHO LOOK LIKE US, ACT LIKE US, BUT HAVE ACCESS TO EVERYTHING AND ANYTHING THAT HAS HAPPENED WITH EVERY PERSON ON EARTH.
WITH SKILLS AND ABILITY TO MAKE A DIFFERENCE FROM SHOWING UP AT THE DOOR OF BAD PEOPLE AND SETTING THINGS RIGHT...BAD DRIVERS CUTTING PEOPLE OFF, NOT USING BLINKERS BEING FOLLOWED AND BEATEN WITH THEIR BLINKER HANDLE WHILE QUICKLY SEEING THE ERROR OF THEIR WAYS...
MORE IMPORTANTLY CORRUPT WORLD LEADERS WAKING UP TO HAVE A MEMBER OR TWO CALMLY SITTING IN THEIR ROOM TO HELP THEM SET NEW AGENDAS TO BEGIN MAKING A DIFFERENCE, STARTING NOW!
KIWI IS A STRONG WILLED TECHNICALLY SAVVEY MIR MEMBER WHO IS RESPONSIBLE FOR TRACKING DOWN SOME OF WORLDS WORST SCUM AND CORRUPT WORLD LEADERS. SHE HAS ALL DATA NEEDED FROM PAST TO PRESENT ON EVERYONE THAT NEEDS SOME FIXING.
RAY G. IS A COCKY ROAD/PLANET WEARY MIR MEMBER WHO HAS BEEN INVOLVED IN MANY PLANET REHABS OVER HIS CAREER AND LOVES THE OPPORTUNITY TO MAKE A DIFFERENCE WHILE CORRECTING POOR ATTITUDES.
JEEVES IS A CLEAN UP MIR MEMBER THAT BACKS UP ALL OF THE TEAM MEMBERS AND CAN BE DESCRIBED AS THE POWERHOUSE OF THE GROUP WITH A SHORT FUSE.
SPARKY IS A ROGUE YOUNGEST MEMBER WHO SHOWS UP AT THE WORST TIMES AND SOMETIMES GOES A LITTLE OVERBOARD
THE TEAM WORKS FOR MR. MIR WHO THEY NEED TO COMMUNICATE WITH ON A DAILY BASIS AND WHO UPDATES THEM ON THEIR PROGRESS IN MOVING THE PLANET OUT OF THE DANGER ZONE AND RESTORING A HEALTHY HUMANITY GOING FORWARD. THE TEAM IS GIVEN TO TASKS FROM PAST AND PRESENT THAT WILL HELP GET THE COSMIC HUMANITY METER OUT OF THE RED ZONE OR EARTH WILL BECOME COSMIC DUST.... NO PRESSURE.
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I don't love the use of "new age" it's cliché and I don't think it's what your story actually is.
A bunch of sick bastard pseudo-heroes must fix humanity one sad sap at a time or [what happens?/stakes?]
I like pseudo, I wanted to make sure no one was expecting heroes in tights and capes
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its giving strong suicide squad vibes. (the comics, not the movies.)