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FORBIDDEN AND UNBREAKABLE
By Sebastian Butler II

GENRE: Drama, Fantasy, Independent, Romance
LOGLINE: A love that is true will shine through no matter what it faces or who it's with.

SYNOPSIS:

In the town of New Hope, there is something brewing in the sleepy town. A scientist named Brian E. Greyson is creating a creature which no one has deemed possible. As he puts the final touches on his labor, his lab is raided and the creature is let loose on the world. Forward about two months, the creature, now known by his scientific name, HC 2.05, has joined up with some previous rejects from the Great Manzinni circus’ sideshow. They survive on their old art of entertaining people and the usual mischief. It’s here that the creature meets his love interest. She is Bethany Anne-Marie DeGraw, the daughter of the local attorney (Anthony DeGraw) of a powerful law firm, VYR Law. After this initial encounter, their lives will be forever intertwined. But, Bethany has a secret, more deadly than the boyfriend she has as she sees HC2.05. She is one of Dr. Greyson earlier, more successful experimentations. She has been trying to hide from that part of her past for the longest of time. She realizes in order for her to love her true love unconditionally, she must love herself first. HC2.05 (later on known as Winston Janis Royce) will help her do just that and in doing so uncover their true feelings for each other that, by it’s very nature, is Forbidden and Unbreakable.

FORBIDDEN AND UNBREAKABLE

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Mandla Bolekaja

Sebastian, I have to tell you this synopsis is really, really interesting. The concept is right in my wheel house. What's the status on the script? Great idea of the love story wrapped within a scifi/horror genre. Very excited to see the full story.

Sebastian Butler II
@Mandla Bolekaja

I saw your reply to my asking for readers post, so you should have a copy to read in your email. if you didn't, let me know and I'll resend it. thanks for the nice words.

Mandla Bolekaja
@Mandla Bolekaja

Yeah, I didn't receive it. You can send it to mbolekaja@yahoo.com

Sebastian Butler II
@Mandla Bolekaja

resent. let me know if you get it. thanks again for your support

Mandla Bolekaja
@Mandla Bolekaja

Got it, thanks. Will respond once I'm finished.

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